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呵呵，好文采，我也写的出来，可惜没胆量，学生知道的事是很多滴

很佩服你的胆量 在高考的时候写这文章，不是一般人，为什么非要在高考写呢？这么好的文采不想去大学深造可惜了！

一篇反应时事的作文被得了零分，也许若干年以后会成为笑柄。

这种文章很现实啊！很社会啊！是批改的老师不懂而已！这种文章应该得满分啊！哎！共产党社会就这样！言论都不自由

你知道为什么零分吗？因为你说的那个新提拔的刘干事就是批你卷子老师的老公啊，这点事叫你说出来了，还不得封杀你啊！

开场景描写不错 很有带入感 纯文学角度本文还算不错的

确实写的不错 但是有点讽刺的味道:excellence

这个作文应该是干事之后写的，写的很不错，很有文采

单论文学而言，写的还是不错了，单是悲哀就悲哀到他是少数正常人

你厉害，胆量太大了吧毕竟是高考，不过文笔不错。

强，真是强，果然高手在民间啊，都是奉献的人啊，卖身不卖艺

这文章写得好啊！文笔流畅，立意鲜明。
一看也像是学生的手笔。

这篇文章写得真绝，真是人才啊。佩服佩服。

我一直想看原创内容评价,关键你倒是说啊,顾左右而言他,太吊胃口了。

说真的 写的是真不错 不过却很难改变什么

这么好的作文，怎么会零分呢，给你100+

卧槽！这特么是高中生写的？这么有阅历，这么有文采，细节那么生动。。。。

又是老司机假借高考之名博人眼球，不过文字清新可喜，确是好文，彩:excellence